Serial Story “Redemption’s Power” Episode 4

•October 18, 2011 • Leave a Comment

Serial Story “Redemption’s Power”

Episode 4  (Read Episode 1: HERE)

 

Reinforcements

The news was on, Chad hated the news; it was never good.

“In the last 10 years there have been an increasing number of documented cases of spontaneous human mutation. These mutations are varied, and often manifest in the teen years. The old term “changeling”, used for children thought to be swapped at infancy by fairies, has been coined for this phenomenon.” the clean cut, smiling man said this in a calm reassuring voice. “Most of these changelings are unfortunate, but harmless. However there are small percentages of cases that have manifested dangerous powers, threatening civil authority and public safety.” The news puppet frowned in mock concern here. “These dangerous individuals need to be controlled and studied to help prevent further tragedies.”

“Chad…” the sound of his name jerked Chad away from the TV. He turned his massive head to look at the exotic beauty of Ms. Wick. Tall and graceful, Wicked Green always made Chad feel even more big, dumb and clumsy. Not that she tried to, but anyone with bright green hair and sharp gold eyes turned heads. Chad only turned heads in horror, looking the part of a “dangerous individual” even if he didn’t feel like one.

“Yeah Ms. Wick?” Chad asked, standing up and moving across the room to her. With short brown hair and brown eyes, his looks would have been homely on a normal sized individual, but at his size the features became monstrous. Chad was bigger than the biggest WWF wrestler and twice as ugly. He could also twist any of them into paste if he was so inclined, but he wasn’t inclined to do much of anything lately. Ms. Wick called it the ‘teenage blues’ and said that he would find his purpose and peace with time. Being 18 years old though, Chad really didn’t know if one more year was going to make much difference on his ‘blues’.

Ms. Wick looked worried and distracted, “Go fetch Mechal and Shawn and meet me in the War room ok?” She was looking at a bunch of papers in her hands, flipping through them over and over.

“What’s wrong?” Chad asked, the “kids” as they were called, had never been invited into the War room.

“Just grab the others, I’m on my way to get Mitzy, and don’t dawdle!” Ms. Wick punctuated this with a finger pointed at Chad’s nose. Only problem was she was like a dandelion trying to boss a redwood.

“Yeah, ok Ms. Wick.” said Chad meekly; being less inclined to argue than possibly any of the other ‘kids’.

After dragging Mechal out of his room, and prying Shawn off the Playstation, Chad entered the War room and looked around for a seat. Then he groaned inwardly, this room wasn’t set up for his… ah… girth. Squeezing around the map table in the center of the room, Chad settled for leaning against the far wall. It was just easier that way. Across from him several computers were set up against the other wall, with a dry erase board on the wall across from the door.

Ms. Wick walked in with Mitzy in tow. Mitzy was a very opinionated 10 yr old with blond pigtails and a tendency to blow things up when angry, but Chad liked her ok. Shawn, though… well the less said about Shawn the better. Shawn thought he was the best the world had to offer, and that everyone should treat him accordingly. Chad wanted to punch him on a daily basis.

Mechal sat down in a chair close to Chad at the table. Mechal was the only person Chad cared to call friend, and he was pretty much an impossible read. The only way Chad knew Mechal liked him at all was because Mechal believed in telling it like it was. So one day, after a grueling practice, Mechal just came out and told Chad that he liked him and wouldn’t mind hanging out more. This came as a complete shock to Chad, mainly because it’s not every day that you got to repeatedly beat up a 100 year old vampire in a 17yr old body and then have him invite you to hang out. They have been hanging out ever since though, and Chad suspects that he’s the only person Mechal can stand to be around for any length of time.

“Ok, here’s the situation.” said Ms. Wick, coming directly to the point. “We have an opportunity to rescue a changeling we have had on our radar for a year. Problem is our window of opportunity is small and we are going to need you kids to pull it off.” Ms. Wick started handing out papers around the table.

“Finally! Some action!” said Shawn, holding his fists up on either side of his head as if he had just won a game he had been working on.

“Just because we get to go,” said Mitzy, “Doesn’t mean you get to fight anything Dork.” she made a face at Shawn.

Shawn’s face fell with his hands, “Nawww…. you gotta let us fight someone!” he was looking pleadingly at Ms. Wick. “I’ve been bored out of my brain since I moved in here!”

“Don’t worry Shawn, for this to work you will all have to use your talents. But that doesn’t mean you get to beat people up.” She looked measuringly at Shawn with her sharp gold eyes and he shrank into himself a little. Very few people could stand up to Ms. Wick’s gaze.

Rumor had it that Ms. Wick had been a student at some prestigious college, when her professor had suddenly jumped off the top of the main building. The resulting investigation turned up a suicide note stating that he could no longer teach because he gave her all A’s and couldn’t explain why. Here to find out Ms. Wick was unknowingly using her talent on her professor, compelling him to give her straight A’s no matter what she did. All Ms. Wick has to do is look directly into your eyes and she has you in a light kind of trance. This makes you very susceptible to suggestion. If she concentrates harder she can order you to do something and you cannot refuse. Ms. Wick didn’t know she had this talent, as far as she knew her mutation was only skin deep as they say. So during the course of the year she had looked into her Professors eyes, discussing her wish to get better grades for instance, and over time he had unconsciously taken the implied suggestion as an order. She had fled the school before they could charge her with anything, and soon after joined The Guild.

“Yeah, sure, I know that. I wasn’t talking ‘bout hittin nobody…” Shawn mumbled to the table.

Ms. Wick seemed satisfied and started in on the briefing, “The subject is Cassandra, 17, currently residing in Italy’s Maximum Security Prison’s Psyc. Ward. We…” she paused dramatically to look over the group, “are going to break her out.”

Amid the shocked silence Shawn asked, “Wow, what did she do to get in there?”

Ms. Wick looked at a file in front of her and said thoughtfully, “She blew up a TGV high-speed electric train killing 236 people.” in the even more stunned silence she added, “Including her father, which has caused her considerable mental distress leading to a diagnosis of Schizoaffective disorder.”

“Are you sure it’s a good idea to let her out then!?” squeaked Mitzy with wide eyes.

“She didn’t do it on purpose Mitzy.” Ms. Wick said reassuringly, “According to our sources she had been suppressing her very powerful gift. And you all know what suppressing a gift can do.” She looked here at Shawn, who was very industriously studying the paper that was passed out. “Her gift is manipulating electricity, and on a high speed electric train, that is a recipe for disaster.” Ms. Wick looked worried and a bit sad, thinking of this poor child, suppressing such a strong gift, and then being faced with some stressor that caused her gift to go rogue killing all those people and her father. It was no wonder she was a bit unstable.

“Why isn’t The Guild going for her?” asked Mechal in his soft voice.

“The Guild has bigger fish to fry right now Mechal.” Ms. Wick’s face pinched with worry, thinking of the others. “We are the only ones able to respond to this opportunity.”

“So what is the big opportunity?” Chad asked.

“That’s what we need to discuss Chad, if you will look at the paper I gave you, you will see the work order for the prison. All of the security cameras are offline with limited communications. Without them, they will not be able to respond as quickly, but it still won’t be easy.”

© Maria Rich 2011

 

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School assignments gone fun!

•October 12, 2011 • Leave a Comment

In my exposition and persuasion class we got a fun assignment! One of the options was to respond with a poem, so here’s mine! Check the video out first!!

View the clip, Monty Python‘s Argument Culture at YouTube http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=teMlv3ripSM

Option 1: What is the difference between contradiction and argument?

Poem response.

Did to!

Did not!

Child’s argument from grown up mouths,

Futile contradiction

Automatic gainsay

Yes it ‘tis!

No it ‘tisn’t!

Easily offered denial

Illogical emotional response

 

Controversial statements establishing

Intellectual dispute

Propositions with reasons offered

Terms with considerations given

For opposition’s plea

I do not agree because…

This is true, but…

Why do you say that is so?

Argument achieved.

~Tina Rich 10/11/2011

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Poem: Blood and Ravens

•October 10, 2011 • Leave a Comment
Raven

Image by Sergey Yeliseev via Flickr

blood and ravens

chilling souls

cut the skin, with

shrieking words

flow of midnight, rush

of sin, to dark

to see, the fear within

3-24-05

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Serial Story episode 3

•October 6, 2011 • Leave a Comment

Serial Story “Redemption’s Power”

Episode 3  (Read Episode 1: HERE , Episode 2: HERE)

Burn Out

 

Cassy watched the lights above her go by… 1..2..3.. as her gurney was pushed down the hall. They had sedated her again, and she had let them. Over the past couple of months (she wasn’t quite sure exactly how long) her doctor had been giving her his version of electro shock therapy. Cassy was a freak twice over; born with the ability to manipulate energy, and scarred with a Schizoaffective disorder that left her hearing the voices of the people she had accidently killed, screaming in her head. Desolation and pain ruled her days now, as she was ‘treated’ for her ‘problem’ in this prison-hospital. She had let them drug her without a fight because she just didn’t see the point of trying anymore.

The Doc. had been using the old electro shock equipment that he had pulled out of the basement of the building. It gave Cassy a headache and made her tingle with energy, but did nothing for the screams in her head. In fact the screams grew louder and more detailed when they did this, making what could have been mildly pleasant into a nightmare. Neither effect had been what the Doc. was after so he had been modifying the old equipment.

Cassy looked around the room as they pushed her in and would have panicked if it wasn’t for the sedative. There was hardly enough room for the people already there let alone her gurney and the ones pushing it. The entire room was edged with big generators. On one side of the room, in between two of the generators was an elaborate computer system with multiple monitors. Two assistants that Cassy did not recognize sat at the computer controls. As people shuffled to get her in the large lab chair, she saw them staring at her with only mild curiosity.

The chair was made totally out of metal and was very cold. Cassy shivered as they sat her in it, but nobody seemed to notice or care. They locked her into the chair with metal restraints and shoved her head into a metal cap. Cassy was sweating now, if she could have screamed she would have. Didn’t they know all this metal conducted electricity!? She hoped to God they had thought to ground it because if they hadn’t and they pumped this much electricity into her…

“I believe we are ready Doctor.” Said one of the computer people she didn’t know.

She wanted to say, ‘ready for what?’ but all she could do was stare at the celling and wait for whatever it was to start. Her mind was tense and screaming, yet her body was limp and completely unresponsive except for the cold sweat of fear that soaked through her gown.

“Let’s start where we left off last time: 300 watts.” said the good Doctor, bending over to look Cassy in the eye. “Today it will be more than a tickle.” He said, and instead of an attempt at humor aimed at reassuring Cassy, his eyes told her he was excited at the prospect of finally hurting her.

She could feel the blood draining from her face, and she tried to struggle against the sedative. Cassy wanted to run, to get away from this horrible man who wasn’t trying to help her, but only break her. The hum of the generators went up a notch and Cassy felt the power flow into the table, and into her. On the old machine the electricity went into her through little electrodes on her head, now they were pumping it directly into the metal table. ‘What were they thinking?’ Cassy thought. Where did they think all this energy was going to go after she filled up?

The energy sang to her as it entered her body, it would have been beautiful if it wasn’t for the screams of the people in her head. As the watts they pumped into her increased so did the volume of their screams. Then they started talking, individual voices carrying through her head over the deafening cries of the dead.

“My baby! You killed my baby!”

“Murderer! Freak!”

“Spoiled child.”

“You should die for what you did!”

On and on they went, as they fed more and more power into the chair and into her. Her gown started smoking and the people watching moved back as far as they could, then her eyes began to glow.

“Yes,” said the Doctor, “now we are getting somewhere. Increase the wattage; we must burn out the circuit!” Cassy wanted to scream in terror at the glee in his voice, but her throat was clenched too tight to even breath let alone scream.

“MURDERER!”

“KILLER!”

“WHY WON’T YOU DIE!”

Cassy’s gown burst into flames and one of the nurses screamed. The Doctor laughed and ordered more power, as an aide put out the flames with a fire extinguisher. Her skin glowed and Cassy felt a mix of ecstasy and horror as the energy washed all traces of the sedative away yet left the voices to roar in her head like an inferno of hate. She once again felt the train’s engines overload, once again saw the look of horror on her father’s face, and in that instance she knew how to stop the energy flow. The table was her connection to the generators, and the computers that controlled them. Clumsily she sent the power cursing through her back the way it had come. She wanted to shut down the computers, so she went through the generators to them and pushed just a little.

The explosion sent the computer people crashing into her table which then sent a massive jolt of electricity into them. They danced and burned and Cassy whispered, “sorry” into the sudden darkness. A darkness broken only by her glow, which did not decrease with the death of the computers, for without the computer’s controlling them, the generators went into overload. They pumped out more and more energy which flowed right into Cassy.

Her back arched as the roar of energy finally drowned out the screams in her head. A sudden wave of euphoria flowed over Cassy and her mind stilled for a split second. In the stillness of her mind Cassy heard the Doctor say, “YES! BURN HER OUT!” and anger took hold of her as it had on the train. That part of her that was the energy reached out and gave the generators a push, sending a violent feedback throughout the entire building’s electrical system. The building shook with multiple explosions, and the last thing Cassy remembered was the good Doctor being enveloped in flames as the generators blew.

 

© Maria Rich 2011

Sorry for the delay

•October 6, 2011 • Leave a Comment
Wolf

Image by Buridans Esel via Flickr

I’ve had a few hectic weeks, and a major bout of the lazies, so I must apologies for my neglect.

On a positive note I finished reading the Mercy series by Patircia Briggs. If you like werewolves, vampires that are not nice, the fae, native american mythos, and just a good story you should check them out!

Here’s a link to the wiki on them, and I just was reading they may make a movie!?

http://www.amazon.com/wiki/The_Mercedes_Thompson_Series/

Anyway, I have the 3rd episode in my serial story ready to go so I will post that next, and I hope to get an excerpt of my novel up soon.

Hope you all enjoy! and what are you reading??

~Mia

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Serial Story episode 2

•September 6, 2011 • 2 Comments

Redemption’s Power

Episode 2 (Read Episode 1: HERE)

Short Circuit

The screams of the dying wouldn’t hush up even after the cup full of pills they forced down her before breakfast. Their incessant clawing at the inside of Cassy’s head made it impossible to eat her breakfast. All she could do was rock back and forth in misery at the cafeteria’s table. An aide offered her a fork full of eggs, but as it reached Sarah’s face a shock ran up the fork and made her drop it with a yelp. Shaking out her numb right hand, she tried to get Cassy to eat some bacon, but the pain in Cassy’s head made her nauseous and the taste of the greasy bacon caused Cassy to puke it, and the pills, up all over the aide.

Cassy wasn’t sure if it was the voices in her head or her that was making the raucous laughter, but she crawled in despair under the table to try to escape it. Pulling her soiled white slip down over her knees, Sarah felt the cold seep into her from the tile floor, and wished it would numb the voices in her head like it did her thin body. Why wouldn’t they leave her alone? She thought. She hadn’t meant to kill them. She didn’t know how to stop doing this thing she did!

Hard hands grabbed her shoulders from behind and tried to pull her out from under the table. Cassy screamed in sudden fear and pushed, not with her hands, but with that power that boiled under the surface of her skin. The hands left her and other screams filled her ears, real ones, full of fear. After a short battle with her tangled hair Cassy managed to get the rest of the way out and look at what she had done. The large male aide was lying still where he had crashed into the neighboring table. The smell of burnt flesh and ozone mingled with the harsh cleaner, greasy food, and fear that saturated the room. The doctor looked up from examining him and regarded Cassy with hard eyes she had come to dread.

“Hold her” he ordered, his eyes narrowing with cold determination. A nurse handed him a syringe and he checked that it was correct.

“No…” moaned Cassy, she knew what this meant. Last time they had sedated her she had lost a week of conscious memory and then got put through the worse tests yet. “Please, I didn’t mean to!”

Three strong aides grabbed her from all of her possible escape routes, picking her up and holding her down on the now vacant table. Cassy felt the power build and realized she could hurt these big men, but who knew what they would do to her if she killed anyone else! Her physical struggles were next to nothing, too many drugs and too little food had been getting into her body the last few months.

“Please!” She begged the doctor as he came up to her now prone form. “Please I’ll be good! I didn’t mean to hurt him. I’ll eat, I swear!” But the doctor only looked at her with disgust and shoved the syringe into her arm. As the needle violated her vein, Cassy’s voiced joined the chorus of dead screaming in her head. The sedative washed all desire away, leaving her helpless on that table, yet she could still hear what was going on around her as in a dream.

“I want this changeling isolated from the rest of the patients, this is what you get when you let these dangerous creatures loose with the general population. “ The hard eyed doctor said.

“Yes doctor,” said the nurse, “perhaps a change in medication will help her control this ‘thing’ she does.” She suggested, her voice dripping disgust.

“I have a theory about that.” The doctor said, “If you want a circuit to stop conducting electricity you short it out…”

© Maria Rich 2011

(Episode 3: HERE)

Fun Parade

•September 1, 2011 • 1 Comment
Jack-o-latern

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The ’90′s saw a whirl-wind of poems from me; for the first time ever I was connected to other poets via WebTV. (wow I’m old!)  So when I was looking for a poem to post for your enjoyment I decided to look in this era of my life. I was really looking for a fall-ish one to go with the fall poems I have been reading on some other blogger’s sites, but this one fit in better with my current search for a Halloween costume. I LOVE Halloween!

Hope you enjoy.

OH, and if you would like to read a very nice fall poem I found a few days ago, head over to Jacsprat.

 

Fun Parade

 

Down to hell’s dark

fun parade

Down to the chill

pleasures of the night

 

Fill your heart with

cool, sweet fear

Fill your mind with

desire’s madness

 

Down to the

chaos of the soul

Down to the

safety of the night

 

Cast aside

loves chains

Cast out the

golden light

 

Down to hell’s dark

fun parade

Down with the wild

ones tonight

 

11-1996

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Something I found on google+

•August 28, 2011 • Leave a Comment

okay have to re post this post from a google+ guy I just started following because its sooooo ….. WOW wish i had read this years ago!

https://plus.google.com/116272478094873453203/posts/EfnX5sJdRQx

Also I am on google+ so if you are plz link me I only have two followers! lol

https://plus.google.com/106366767411829224628/posts

~Mia

Serial Story “Redemption’s Power” Episode 1

•August 28, 2011 • 5 Comments

Episode 1

Gathering Storm

Cassy felt the weight of the walls as if they were sitting on her chest, hanging off her shoulders, bowing down her head like a stone crown. The drugs in the needle they had forced into her vein didn’t help the feeling of total suppression. “I guess this is what ‘Maximum Security Prison’ feels like,” Cassy mumbled, plucking at the thin bleached sheets. She didn’t deserve this; she hadn’t meant to hurt anyone! Tears blurred her vision; “I’m not evil Daddy, I swear!” she called out as the past overwhelmed her.

***

The train gave her a headache and Cassy rubbed her temples irritably while her dad went on about how these trains were the future of cross country travel. Faster and cheaper than cars, the high speed electric trains were more practical than planes and could transport more people. But Cassy didn’t care; she knew why he was babbling on about the stupid train. He was avoiding talking to her.

“Dad please!” said Cassy exasperated. “If you don’t want to talk to me than at least let me sit here in peace!” They were in a private car near the front of the train. Cassy could feel the engines pumping all that voltage into the train. It traveled under her, through her, and into her. Concentrating on it, she could hear it roaring all around her. This is what was making her head ache as if someone was stabbing her temples.

Cassy’s father paused in his adulations of the train, and looked at her with a mix of annoyance and distrust. “Cassy I’m not avoiding talking with you, if you want to talk about something else, just say so.”

Cassy didn’t believe him; he had been carefully NOT talking about what happened to Charles for the last few weeks. “Then let’s talk about what we are going to do about this.” she said, determined to corner him into an answer.

“Do about what Cassy?” he said, guards going up all over his face.

Cassy ground her teeth in frustration, a buzzing started in her ears and she rubbed her temple again. “About me dad!” she cried, flinging her hands out in exasperation, “about me nearly killing Charles!” She remembered how she felt when Charles had forced her to kiss him, how the energy had risen up from inside with her panic. She recalled how he had just lain there after she shocked him, how the hand print burned into his chest had smelled like plastic melted onto a stove…

Her father was very quiet, his face completely closed to her, and she mentally shrank from the void of emotion she saw there. “I am taking you to Italy Cassy; I will enroll you in school there while I work out the details for my next project.”

“But…” Cassy felt betrayed, was he going to farm her out? “What if it happens again Dad?” she asked quietly.

“Nothing is going to happen, Cassy, you will go to school and nothing is going to happen.” he said, picking up the daily paper and opening it.

Cassy felt a sudden rage, she stood up across the table from her father, “So that it, is it?” she said, “You’re just going to ignore what is happening to me?” Her hands were clenched at her sides; the buzz was now the roar of hurricane winds.

“Sit down Cassy, there is nothing happening to you, you merely have an overactive imagination.” he didn’t even look up from the paper, dismissing the topic altogether.

The roar was now a screech and Cassy barely heard herself say: “Did I imagine the burnt handprint on Charles’ chest? Did I imagine the paramedics barely reviving him with the paddles!? Did I imagine the cops asking me all those questions or the disgust in their eyes as they whispered ‘mutant’ behind my back!?!”

Cassy’s dad finally looked up from his paper and the empty look in his eyes was replaced with fear when he saw his daughter. Her hair was standing out from her head, her hands dripped blood from her nails as they dug into her palms, and her eyes glowed white hot like lightning.

“Cassy!” her father gasped, “Stop!”

“Stop!? Stop!! How can I stop Father?? I’m IMAGINING THIS!” Cassy screamed and in that moment that part of her mind which felt the energy, reached out and touched the train’s engines. A real mechanical scream caused Cassy to clasp her hands over her ears as the engines overloaded and started feeding back on themselves. She realized in that second what she had done and she tried to stop it, but she didn’t know how.

“Daddy!” she cried, looking into her father’s frightened eyes, “NO!”

***

Cassy jerked awake in a bare cell room, her sheets were drenched in sweat. She stared at the white walls for a few minutes, remembering the screams of the people on the train as it blew up. Mostly though, she remembered her father, running around the table in their compartment, trying to shield Cassy from what she had done.

© Maria Rich 2011

(Episode 2: HERE)

Serial Story “Redemption’s Power”

•August 28, 2011 • Leave a Comment

I was reading this fascinating article about writing serial stories: http://www.fuelyourwriting.com/writing-serial-fiction/

So I decided to try my hand at them. In the spirit of the “penny dreadfuls” of old, this story will be spit out of my brain in episodes. Most of them will be lightly edited by just me, so be warned of their potentially raw quality. The story I’ve decided to use was started in my Creative Writing class last year, so some of it will have been peer reviewed and graded. One ‘episode’ will be in a Drama format, because we had to do a drama. To be honest I don’t know how this story ends. My hope is to be pleasantly surprised.

The story is called Redemption’s Power, so please enjoy and comment all you like!

OH! And I am aware of its similarities to a certain great and all powerful comic book series/tv/movies. The characters and story line is completely all mine though as I hope you will be able to see for yourselves. Besides I don’t believe you can copywrite an entire genre of sci-fi, so I think I’m pretty safe on that account.