Obviously school and writing don’t seem to work for me, but now that school’s out I am going to get to work! So… lets see where I stand on my novel…
- Timeline troubles; still needs work, going to try plugging stuff into an excel worksheet I got (see below)
- Romance upgrade on first meeting scene; adding sensory input to enhance scene.
- horror = fear = tension and I need to go through the whole story and increase this
That should do for a start.